I like this poem!
Like Mr G, I LOVE the bit where it says ‘the fire is a narrator’! I wouldn’t even of thought about that!
Looking forward to see more of your creative poems!
I love your poem! It makes me feel all toasty, warm and cosy on a cold winter night drinking a cup of hot chocolate with cream and marshmallows……. Memories :)!
I hope you enjoy my harvest poem.
Mr G:
I love the fire as a narrator, Josafina! What a brilliant metaphor!
Do you know personification? It is writing as if objects are alive; I wonder how you could describe a chair…………?
I like this poem!
Like Mr G, I LOVE the bit where it says ‘the fire is a narrator’! I wouldn’t even of thought about that!
Looking forward to see more of your creative poems!
thank you
Amazing imagination!!;)
WOW realy great and poweful
I love your poem! It makes me feel all toasty, warm and cosy on a cold winter night drinking a cup of hot chocolate with cream and marshmallows……. Memories :)!
GREAT!
Wow! I like the way you said the fire is a narrator.
I love your poem! It makes me feel like I am relaxing next to the fire in the winter.