Great start, Rubie! It’s a pretty interesting idea that you have started, here. It’s very much like a mix of Hansel and Gretel, Sleeping Beauty and others!
I would just say KEEP YOUR FEMALE PROTAGONIST STRONG! Does she REALLY need a kiss from a prince to wake her?!
I will write some more soon:)
Mr G
Great start, Rubie! It’s a pretty interesting idea that you have started, here. It’s very much like a mix of Hansel and Gretel, Sleeping Beauty and others!
I would just say KEEP YOUR FEMALE PROTAGONIST STRONG! Does she REALLY need a kiss from a prince to wake her?!
That is so good Rubie, I think that is job done.