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  1. bloggycurtis says:

    Well done cameron nice work on your metaphor poem, i really like the 10th line down ‘swirling circles up and down’.
    Well done i am proud of you.
    By your friend
    Curtis Trott

    p.s please can you read mine and give it a comment it is The Tornado by Bloggycurtis.

  2. FreyaC says:

    Well Done !

  3. PhoebeMW says:

    Cool blog Cameron !:)

  4. CameronP says:

    Thanks guys and Curtis I have replied to your poem .

  5. FireEthan says:

    Very good description Cameron!

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