If you are so kind to read this and leave a comment i would be really grateful. 🙂
Mr G
“Pitch dark night” – great line, Curtis!
Did you find it a challenge to make this rhyme? Perhaps you can think about effective lines that do not rhyme, next time?
how about:
“curved beaked, curved taloned, straight death-dealer.” – what do you think?
Thank you Mr G will try and make another poem and try it at the moment i am working on a world war one. 🙂
Amazing poem Curtis ‘terrible screech’ a brilliant piece of description !!
Thanks cam if you have not notice i have left a comment 😉
Amazing creative poem Curtis! You have alot of good description in it and the poem describes more than the photo! I’ll enjoy seeing more of your poems! – Lucie
Great poem Curtis 🙂 The tornado is described the best as an eagle!
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If you are so kind to read this and leave a comment i would be really grateful. 🙂
Mr G
“Pitch dark night” – great line, Curtis!
Did you find it a challenge to make this rhyme? Perhaps you can think about effective lines that do not rhyme, next time?
how about:
“curved beaked, curved taloned, straight death-dealer.” – what do you think?
Thank you Mr G will try and make another poem and try it at the moment i am working on a world war one. 🙂
Amazing poem Curtis ‘terrible screech’ a brilliant piece of description !!
Thanks cam if you have not notice i have left a comment 😉
Amazing creative poem Curtis!
You have alot of good description in it and the poem describes more than the photo!
I’ll enjoy seeing more of your poems!
– Lucie
Great poem Curtis 🙂 The tornado is described the best as an eagle!